Dear forum members,
I am right now working on my website and I feel ,I need to do some brainstorming about the writing attractive mission statement. :)
I have some ideas and here I am sharing them with you. Please fill free to offer your ideas and give your feedback . :)
I have two examples ,one is from Estonia and an other one is from Azerbaijan.
I really liked how they described what they are doing.
Estonia example : https://futureheroes.ee/
Azerbaijan example: https://wowoman.org/
Here is my examples:
The sentence is written with bolt letters is a title ,the sentence under it is a description.
1. We are a supportive community encouraging girls to discover their true potential .
newHorizons is an adolescent girl leadership program for 12- 17 years old girls, to prepare them for life, and help them to develop English language skills.
2.We empower girls with the skills and mindset to exercise the power of their voice.
3. We are making a positive impact in the girls futures.
4.We are in a mission to help young girls to fulfill their dreams.
Thank you!
Dear Nagiz, I like the first one the most without the half sentence about English: "We are a supportive community encouraging girls to discover their true potential .
newHorizons is an adolescent girl leadership program for 12- 17 years old girls, to prepare them for life." English courses are one of the (hopefully) many programs you will provide in the future. The mission statement do not need to have a list of all of your programs but can be a summary of your actions. You emphasize here "encouragement" and "leadership" which is a very strong message in a culture where women are rather dis-encouraged from any leadership/entrepreneurship/independence. Still the phrasing is gentle enough not to scare away people with too strong activism.
Dear Zsolt ,
Thank you for the feedback.
Then I will keep it simple. :)
I added title and the description. You can check it from here. http://newhorizons.forsatsaz.com/
Hi Nargiz, what's the matter with the date of each post (It is duplicated?) Maybe in the code you can ask Sara to help, the date is shown twice
I put them there as an example. Today I will work on the content of the posts. :)
@Nargiz Askerova I mean the 'date' (pls
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Dear Nargiz,
I like the 4th one better than others.
As the girls which you want to work with always do dreaming and they are hopeless of achieving to their dreams (mostly they dream about simple things). I think you can talk about how NewHorizons can help them with empoverimg their potenial to achieve their dream.